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The prologue is over. No choice this time.
Now you all finally get to meet the other protagonist! Commander Speartip.
I’m terribad at designing new spaceships (though I loved making it), so the Arion is just a modified Normandy. I did design the little transport… that I’m calling the Shnozz. I didn’t even realize it had a giant nose until I was halfway through working on it. Lastly, it wouldn’t be a proper Mass Effect parody/crossover thingy without some lens flare going on.
I wuvs it though ;-;
The Luna "cutie mark rag" in the trashbin was easter egg genius. ^^
The way I see it is that by this point, she'll have come to terms with all of that and have developed some healthy coping habits. That topic has been explored over and over again by fics and other fanart. While it can be an interesting subject, it's not something I anticipate bringing up here.
In season 4 first two episodes to prove everyone that Twilight is not OP as alicorn, they made her underpowered ( she was doing worse then when she was an unicorn ), and while in the past Celestia showed that she can be a fighter who can dodge and even take a powerful hit, for four seasons she was useless ( 15 second fight against Chrysalis, become Princess Peach when Nightmare Moon or evil vines arrive - I think that Celestia was not imprisoned in the sun or anywhere else because it would make no sense since she needed elements to seal Luna in the moon, but many fans of the show just say that Celestia was banished when Nightmare Moon appeared ).
What I try to say is that I hope you won't make Twilight underpowered for the sake of the story and conflict ( or to let the second protagonist who does not have power of an alicorn to shine ). Let it be that Twilight pick up the bigger problems while her partner weaker ones, just please, do not make her weak.
I expected you would use a Fallout Equestria-esque system for equipment (Mouth-triggers and Battle-saddles).
But, eh, unicorns. They get all the luck.
Oh god, I didn't even realise that.
Why does it always surprise me when the beginning companion dies?
IT HAPPENS IN ALMOST EVERY BIOWARE GAME!